Feedback
People thought that the jumbled up title was enough and that the word vogue didnt need to be repeated underneath, they suggested that I use this overlapped title on the coloured design I had done (prototype 1) as they think it would work better. Overall people liked the design but prefer the design done with coloured image as it is more suitable for a magazine and will stand out amongst competition still whilst maintaining my idea to look different from standard layouts. They liked the framing I had used of the O to accentuate the models face and said I should try do this in my final design. The also think that the 'red lipstick' caption should be more of a feature as it is such a cliche feature to have in a fashion/ beauty magazine.
Work in response to feedback
After looking back at my feedback I decided to remove the block of white from behind the 'vogue' title. I chose to use it as a frame as people liked this from my original design. The overlapping of the two Os looks similar to the chanel CC logo as well as the Gucci logo which I think fits nicely as these are two brands that advertise in vogue so it is a subtle reference to them. I think the style of this whole cover has a very vintage feel to it and seems a bit out dated therefore I won't be continuing on with this design further.
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