Feedback
The feedback I got for this was that they liked the solid block of white cutting across the page and that it broke things up nicely. They also liked the fact none of the text was readable and that even the bits that were are cut off and leaves a lot to the imagination. Someone commented on how they liked the fact the main focus of text after 'vogue' is the 'in red lipstick' sentence which makes people wonder what this could be about and doesn't give too much away. A suggestion I got was to continue the chopped off text round the back of the magazine so that it wraps around which I like the idea of. It was even suggested that there was more clutter in the top left corner to juxtapose with the space in the rest of the layout.
Work in response to feedback
Here is the redesign of my magazine front cover after receiving feedback from it. I took on the advice to make the top left corner more cluttered to juxtapose with the structure and minimalistic nature of the rest of the cover however I much prefer the way it looked before. As for the 'life lessons in red lipstick' line I like the new placement of this as I think it summarises nicely the type of stories and articles people expect to find in vogue. I chose to declutter the top corner but keep the lipstick line above the vogue title. I changed the capital L at the beginning of the lipstick quote to a lowercase so that it flowed better.
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