Feedback
Out of all three of my designs this was the one that people favoured the most, when I asked my peers they said the colours from the imagery give off an indie, bohemian style which is different to the usual 'vogue' style. They also like the way the price was big as this is something that is usually hard to find on a magazine, it also makes it seem more approachable because you can tell instantly if it is something you can afford or not. People liked the fact that just one line of the cluttered text ones in red to match with the fact it was about red lipstick. They also liked the fact that the front cover doesn't give much away about what is in the magazine as it leaves more to the imagination and makes you want to flick through it. It was also suggested that I try just zooming into the models face and having it up close even if it is a bit pixilated this may add a nice quality to it. It was also suggested that I try to distort the title 'vogue' more or not to put it in the iconic place from their standard layout.
Work responding to feedback
Here is my initial design after responding to the feedback I got, I think the block of repeated text at the top of the page works well and I like the highlight of red amongst the black text, I think it works because the image is in colour and it doesn't look cliche like it would using red text on top of a black and white background. It took me a while to work out what was wrong with this image then I realised the white block which was originally around the 'vogue' at the top was behind the block of text, I don't think it works well here therefore I moved it behind the vogue title again. I agree with my feedback and think the word 'vogue' looks better overlapped and not at the top of the page.
Overall I really like this new design however I am still unsure as to where to place the '£3.99' I want to somehow use it as a frame like one of my other designs as people said they liked this element.
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